Monday, 18 October 2010

Alphabet soup two final crit.



Final Piece. 
Issues raised: 
From a distance the letters look as though they have a wood grain effect.
The counters don't really needed to be coloured in. 
It almost looks a bit cartoony although this was not purposely.
How would it look in lower case? 

Action to be taken: 
Try the font in upper and lower case. 
Actually break it up to get rid of this 'wooden' effect. 
Make the outlines less bold. 
Try using a ruler to make the overall outcome look less cartoony. 




Name badge. 


Refined final piece after taking crit comments into consideration. 

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