We had to give feedback to another group after having the crit on friday so here is the response we have given group 8.
- posters could be more motivational and hard hitting to get people to take notice of what they are about.
- are the ideas too feminine? I felt they communicated to me and worked for me but the guys in the group disagreed.
- the final outcomes could have been put out into the public eye so that the effectiveness of posters and such could have been seen.
- the style of the posters may need to be revised.
- the idea of using quotes works quite successfully.
- the original chosen topic to work with was 'give more' but would 'try something new' have been closer to the final outcomes as fitness etc was promoted in the posters and t-shirts.
- an idea was clearly identified but could have possibly been executed in a different way to give the ideas their full potential.
overall we thought this project was a good response to the brief but as with most peoples work there is odd things that could be looked at again and the project could be pushed further.
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