Communication is a virus; first crit.

After having our crit it was brought to our attention that our original idea had too many unanswered questions and needed more a purpose to persuade people to try all these new activities. Why would someone want to go to the yorkshire dales? for example, how would this benefit them? The other problem was doing more than 20 ideas would be aiming a bit too high and the whole idea in general has been done so many times before. The idea needs to be more original and exciting. However, the fact our design boards were clear and neat was appreciated. We are in a decent place after having this crit because we can use a lot of the information we have already found out to come up with a better idea.