There was a number of issues raised at the crit based on the 'final' resolutions we presented, although these issues were not going to put us totally off track and can be resolved in the time remaining on this project.
things to resolve;
- use a facebook status instead of face to face conversational quotes on the posters.
- make the posters clearer.
- remove the 'facebook' logo as our pieces look too much like a product of facebook.
- a website is not appropriate for the message we are trying to send as its too close to the idea of being online and social networking, use more physical ways of advertising/presenting an idea.
- change the date to make it more memorable eg. WEDNESDAY 23rd not just 23.3.2011
- make sure all the text on posters and flyers is in lower case as this is less harsh.
- change 'face 2 face' possibly using the facebook logo for the 'face' part.
- a leaflet would be more successful than the website.
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