Interim crit:
- the imagery used is too literal and could be thought about more cleverly.
- there should only be six to eight letters on a line of text.
- the text is harder to read when in capitals.
- the fact could be changed because its not so reliable with being a child's opinion.
- the font could also link more to television (pixelated)
action to be taken;
- address all above issues raised.
- re work until a satisfactory idea is reached in time for final crit.
This is the final idea i created after taking all the above things into account that were said about my initial ideas. I feel the idea has benefitted really well overall from the interim crit.
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